So, Jason...i think you came through in the clutch when it came to the main event and shit man. But first...i must talk about the WHOLE show, including the section wrote by Mr. Matthews
Chuckles...you done good mate. I liked the VVR/LIBBEH exchange and the Timmy/Tyson match was one of the most solid things i've seen you write in awhile. I'm sorry for kinda tweeking out on you last night in the chatbox about you being burned out and shit...but it kinda needed to be said before I had a stress induced stroke LOL. I promise to begin assigning you more important/more in depth shit when it comes to dishing out writing assignments...we will see if we can't drag the old Chuck Matthews out of his funk!
Jason...Sharky said it best..."Shit was propa!" I gotta say, your flow is getting better and (besides the obvious few english mistakes scattered throughout which you can't be blamed for since your from a different country where English isn't the predominant language) the show was real real good. I might make a few less references to people coughing up blood and try to vary up how people are bloodied (gashes, cuts and the like) and I don't know if giving Apollos a concussion and LIBBEH some broken ribs right off the bat was the best way to go and then having them be booked on the next card. If you are gonna have them be brutally assaulted i might go a different way or give the guy being assaulted the week off the next week. Because, to me at least, if a guy gets broken ribs and/or nearly gets fucking killed in the ring (like Apollos) and then is expected to no sell the injury and be good to go on the next card...that kinda screams "Nick Russo/NLWF" booking style. Again, this is just a suggestion.
Other than that mate, the matches were fucking awesome and I loved what you did with the ending of the show! Keep up the good work birdman!