Yeah I thought the show was solid, it could have been better but I think we (the writers) were all a bit busy this week. By the way I'd like to thank Chuck for writing the second half of my part since I didn't have time to, CHEERS CHUCKLESNAKE!
Oh yeah, and to give some respectful advice to our newest writer, JAY HAWK! One thing I noticed was that during Jason's in ring promo introducing the New Blood title, was that in the pauses of his speech he only ever did one thing - Adjusting the title belt on his shoulder. To avoid repetition you could have said "Jason Hawk pauses" or "Jason Hawk paces around the ring". That being said, I thought the rest of your part was awesome for a guy who's first language is not English. Keep it up