Feed the Kitty!

Looking for feedback on this weeks piece of work. "Starting Point"

All sincere comments will be appreciated.

Thanks in advance.

Sav

Hola mi amiga! Me nombre es Flex!

Now on to the feedback.

What worked for me
Descriptions: You gave the reader so pretty good imagery in the opening scene
Shoot: The was solid, given that it was your first one here in the fed

What didn't work for me
Background CD: I think a little bit of background about your character would have done wonders for your rp. Now, you did mention a little bit; you talked about her involvement with Thor. But as a reader, I'm not sure that I have a better handle on character based on your rp.