Alright Damo, I enjoyed your RP this week. Your CD showed bits and pieces on what makes Damien tick, plus left the whole HFF thing up in the air, making people wonder why you had to do to Axle's? What is going on? I thought it worked well.
The only thing that stood out to me as a negative was your shoot. Now I did like that you snuck it into your Cd, it was creative, and imo it worked. What I didn't like was that it was only one paragraph. Now yes it is hard to shoot on someone you know nothing about, but when in doubt, talk copious amount of shit. Draw on your wins, draw on your CD. Even though the points are empty (they nearly always are against new opponents), expand on them, talk yourself up as much as you can.
In general I liked it, and once you start really shooting liek a monster, I can see great things from you Mr. Drake.
Gordo.