Not to shabby there bud.
The writing was solid; you had a good mix of CD and shoot.
Now, there were only a couple of things that stood out to me.
1. "Jack Savage: Everything that I have done to all of these useless little girls who have made the mistake of getting into the ring with me has turned me into, not only the most feared man in the UECW Vixen's Locker Room, but one of the most feared men by all of the little girls in great sport of professional wrestling."
-I don't know man, this paragraph and the next couple to follow sound a little "rapey."
2. I think a little color coding would really make your RP pop, even if you just coded Jack's words.
Anyway, keep up the good work.