Wanted: Feedback

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Ok guys and gals, I would really like some feedback on what I've been doing the past 2 RPs with Desmond. I've been trying something a little different than usual and would like to get some opinions on it. What's good, what's bad, is it all bad, what would you like to see more or less of, ect. I'm really at the point with Desmond where I'm just trying different things and seeing what sticks.