Breaking the Curse

Alright, it is my mission to break this so called CM Punk curse. So my first rp is up, lay it all on the line

The Feedback King has come to grace you with an RP review.

Let us begin:

1. I saw a couple of spelling errors-nothing too serious though.

2. I spotted a Double Negative sentence somewhere near the end of shoot-I'm not the grammar police, but that sentence did make me say "ohhh."

3. Let's talk about your mythology references. Now, I LOVE mythology, so it didn't bother me too much. However, I could see how it could turn people off. Mythology normally requires some kind of frame of reference; and after the second story, many people may not have a frame of reference.

-Also, I think four stories were a bit to much. It might have been better if you had picked two and then went into more detail on those two.

Well, those are all my major issues. Overall, I thought the RP was very solid. Good job sir.

New BG Rp up, lay it on me folks

Ok so here goes. I thought personally the RP was very well written and set out what Caid is all about, my only concern is that I'm of the firm belief that you should never bash your opponents so bad that no one cares about them, which is what i feel you did with myself and Cameron. Even the most arrogant cocky heel will put his opponent over in his promos. Just my personal thought other than that it was good