Tick Tick Tick Tick rp feedback

Usually I don't do this much, I seriously don't ever remember posting a feedback for my rp in past feds. But yeah would like know you y'all think about it? Personally I like it better than my two debut rps, although those two were longer, I think I'm starting to get use to my new character (Aric Voss). Something that usually takes me about a month, so this is happening quite fast which is good.

NOTE: Marcus Williams was once Shaun Ryan. Decide to change names, simply was not comfy with Shaun Ryan.

Anyway thoughts on my rp. The whole Tick Tick Tick Tick idea is that Aric has a short temper and he's like a ticking time bomb waiting to explode.

Tick, Tick, Tick, Tick roleplay (click here to read)