Debut Roleplay feedbackl

Some feedback on my debut roleplay for Battlegrounds, been a while since I roleplayed with this character. Thanks.

Good stuff, man, especially for an introductory RP.

The shoot was pretty average. But, to be fair, it's a debut. Once you learn the ropes, learn more about some people's characters, I'm sure it'll get there.

The character himself looks pretty sweet. Then again, I might be biased towards the whole "Corporate figure" type thing

I started the Character Development part when I got accepted here, yeah the shoots should get better. I am planning on one more roleplay at least. I have to introduce the other aspect of who Brent Carter is.

This is one of the best things about e-fedding. Getting a new guy in that actually writes quality RPs

Keep up the good work

Yeah, I thought it was a great RP for your debut. You can tell that you've been RPing before, maybe not with this character, but you've got a good feel for things.

As Chuck and you were saying, the shoot was nothing special, but it's nearly impossible to write a good shoot in your debut. Once you get more involved, in a storyline, learn some of the people, your shoots will improve greatly.

Shits Proper

Yeah I been roleplaying for a minute now, been on and off these past few years because of internet connection problems. In used this character beifly before but this is the first time I am using him as a full time character. Looking foreward to the future here with it.