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 |  Subject: Feedback  Sat May 14, 2011 10:19 pm | |
| Since everybody else asking for feedback, I might as well too.
So what does everyone think?
If you think it was a bit unbelievable, then you're wrong because it was a legend.
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Corey Casey
Posts : 1395
Join date : 2011-03-01
Age : 36
Wrestler Stats
IWF Record: 27-12-1
Alignment: In Between
| | Subject: Re: Feedback Sat May 14, 2011 10:23 pm | |
| LMAO
love the "fuck you" attitude Crux!
I loved the rp man...the pics made the whole thing really jump. It gave a good visual aid to the whole thing. The only thing i might say you should add is a shoot section. Kind of a section where you rip into your opponent verbally and shit...i know that it's hard considering your opponents haven't written anything for you to work with...but still... | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: Feedback Sun May 15, 2011 12:10 am | |
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Chuck Matthews
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Posts : 1020
Join date : 2011-03-01
Age : 33
Location : Chicago, Illinois
Wrestler Stats
IWF Record: 12-16-2
Alignment: Heel
| | Subject: Re: Feedback Sun May 15, 2011 1:21 am | |
| I would actually recommend coloring what people say. Like, you color the names, but not their words...and in some spots, it was a bit confusing as to where the speech stopped and the narration began again. Does that make sense?
Otherwise, it was definitely an interesting read.
Horcrux Lave is a Mini-Death-Angel. SRSLY. | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: Feedback Sun May 15, 2011 2:45 am | |
| I know J Shark already said it but....
Shits proper. |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: Feedback Sun May 15, 2011 1:34 pm | |
| It was a good first RP Horcrux. I pretty much think Chuck nailed it when he talked about the coloring. It was a little confusing, but just work on that. Overall it was a great RP. A whole lot better then my first RP here  Kudos Lave. |
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