Feedback Plz.

Just posted my first one on the battlegrounds card. Someone mind taking a look for me? I'm pretty okay with it, but not digging the last section too much.

HALP.

I thought it was pretty solid. I mean, given that it was your first match, against two guys that haven't been here too long, and don't really have a history to look at, there's not a whole lot you can say about them. So I don't think the last part was bad at all, all things considered

shits proper