Sup homie.
I read your RP twice. So, here are thoughts:
1. You did a good job with your character development portion; you do a good job showing how mean he is. Now, what I'd like to see further down the line is the REAL Allen. What I mean is, what he think internally, what drives his decisions, etc. But again, you are just introducing him to the IWF, so all that isn't needed right now.
2. Then came the "shoot" section. Now, the shoot wasn't bad. However, I do believe it could have been a bit longer. To me, it only seemed like you dedicated four or five paragraphs towards your actual opponents. In my opinion, your RP would improve if you focused a little bit more on this section. One thing I used to do is write the shoot part first, since technically it's the "meat" of the RP in most cases.
But as a whole, I enjoyed the RP. Please keep up the good work.